...if i die young: This is an excert from my first book. Please comment! Thanks
Via ...if i die young
She sits by the window overlooking the lying green pastures while listening to the winds quiet whispers beating against her soft curls. Since starting here this has been her only moment of peace. The scent of rain filling her nostrils reminding her of home. Ever since Edward went away the only…
I honestly think it’s nice, but maybe a bit hard cut. The sentences seem to stop, rather than finish. Aside from that, pretty good.
Simply Gorgeous……Kira Andrea
^Agreed. i literally stopped and came back. i was all like
and then i was like
i love Ashton in










